PERSUASIVE WRITING
"I didn't mean to kill her"
Someone call 911 as the eyes of shocked people come rushing by, I continue to yell 'someone call` the ambulance!' but no one took a bar of it, they stood around gasping as if something cool just happened. But after all, the ambulance arrived but for my lack of knowledge, I heard the police pull up too. So i became paranoid overthinking like I was just about on my way to jail for the rest of my life. I stood away from the little girl on the urge of balling with tears I sat on the sidewalk thinking about the consequences that could come upon this major problem.
A police officer comes walking towards me asking me silly questions but first started off with "whats your name madam" I replied sorrowly with 'Tiana Une' the police went on and on with the questions but I wasn't interested I stood up and got told stay by the car police car. I stood there in silence wondering how much worser it could've been if I was driving faster.
I got told to explain how this incident went down, and i started of with "Okay so" which really explains bow nervous i was. i continued my story saying how it was growded with so many people and the speed limit was 30
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