persuasive writing

Boxing Should Not Be Classified As A Sport”

Personally i think boxing should be classified as a sports because it helps control your everyday movement with your hand and how you use your fist physically, i also think that it shows your strength and where you need to work on as opposed to health and fitness. Although on the other hand i think that it may be dangerous and has side effects to it, within the saying of ‘One Punch, Can Kill’ boxing iis a great sport and i truly think it should be classified as a sport. Boxing has intelligence along with its cause and it has history ov much awesomeness towards how great people fight and why its a great as many would say “sport”

All teenagers shouldnt have curfew at 7pm”

I believe as a teenager myself they should have curfew at 7... Though it may be safer or “is” safer because of the chaos that goes on in this world. & the gangs that have made our country unsafe, not only the safety, but lack of sleep could cause stress and depression and absences of kura. People in our country could make it far in life if they had a head space of not just gangs and our country could be a lot safer. It could be dealt with if children had a curfew an had been kept safe under supervision. Because 2018 has been a year full of children not being able to come home to their served dinner & parents having to wake up to bad news of their child's death due to havoc caused in the streets and that's a wrongdoing towards a child but not only them…. the parents as well, and that's where curfew comes in. teenagers should be ensured that they are home safely and soundly because regardless of the craziness of this country our country is more beautiful without the chaosity.

New Zealand / Aotearoa is not the safe country we like to think it is.

I strongly disagree that aotearoa is not the safe place we like to think it is. It is just the majority of people that make it look like a bad place to live in i think that the gang's here in nz may make our country look crazy & violent. But they do have a meaning for themselves and most of them are and/or look antagonizing but Aotearoa has people with the heart of gold. Aotearoa has many things other countries don't have, and these gangs Mongrel Mob, Black Power, Tribes Men shouldn't affect the look of nz, many people from other countries only take note of the bad things that have happened in nz they don't take note of the good things that happen around the neighborhoods and the conflict that goes through the eyes of these young children. Aotearoa is a safe country, whatever the weather you have just got to ensure your going to down the right path when your given paths to go down.